The It technician gave me feedback for my first draft the feedback he gave me to prove on is underneath:
- Spellings of the title (Mystery)
- 0:08 remove sound of camera moving
- 0:29 cut the shot
- 0:35 add room tone
- 0:54 extend clip to finish sentence
- 1:30 Fix broken audio
- 1:59 use a voiceover text on screen not long enough just use voice over
- 2:10 Use colour correction to blend colours
- 2:25 Cut on action
- 3:32 the effect used twice to little either overload it or completely scrap the idea
- 3:58 Don't use text on screen
- 4:14 Text not there for long enough
- 4:36 Extend
- 4:37/4:38 cut to black
- 4:58 Come back into focus
- 2:06 Zoom into cookbook
I will take the It technicians advice and make these adjustments to make my short fil
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